Flash: Buffet

Strobe lights flash over the room, blue then white and finally red. A slow eerie wail pierces the crowd noise and the curtains draw back in time with the slow beat of a single drum.

Head thrown back inky hair flows nearly to her waist, she stands still as a statue the only thing moving is white fog swirling up around perfect legs. Spotlights flash on either side, mirror images heads bowed, supplicants.

She moves down the steps, the drum beats faster. Her hips move flowing as if unhinged, fluid. All eyes follow her, silent and worshipful; this is the moment they have waited for. The mirror images move, lift their heads and join her in dance; their bodies move together, clothing drops. A veritable buffet a cornucopia of womanhood on display before a room of wolves and the room erupts in whistles and dollar bills.


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This week’s word isΒ Buffet. The word limit is 150 words. This one comes in at 146.

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  1. Very evocative. I like this one a lot!

  2. Still makes me smile πŸ™‚

  3. Could use some of those dollar bills myself. Must read that again for instructions. LOL

  4. Super hot, Valentine. I must live too sheltered a life as I expected the boys in blue at the mention of the lights. This whole piece is utterly f.l.u.i.d. You’ve sure captured the mood. I’m still swaying with her (even with MY knobby knees). This is awesome.

  5. Yes ….. Somehow I picture a strip club early, so the end brought confirmation …. I finally got one right! πŸ˜‰

  6. Her hips move flowing as if unhinged, fluid. ***

    YESssss, I see her. I am her!

    See you soon, V.

  7. Meat on the menu, boys!

  8. Gray Dawster says:

    She sounds absolutely sublime πŸ™‚
    Wow you can certainly write these
    FTP’s Val and with such style πŸ™‚

    I love this one πŸ™‚
    Have a wonderful Thursday my dear friend πŸ™‚

    Andro xxxx

    • Thanks my friend. Buffet, not always food to be piled on a plate right.

      • Gray Dawster says:

        No, but I like the idea of it πŸ™‚
        Thank you for viewing my nutty
        videos Val, actually I have just
        added another one equally as
        crackers but it’s all in good fun
        and taste I think, well hopefully
        it is anyway πŸ™‚ lol

        Have a lot of fun today my sweet friend πŸ™‚

        Andro xxxx

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