Strobe lights flash over the room, blue then white and finally red. A slow eerie wail pierces the crowd noise and the curtains draw back in time with the slow beat of a single drum.
Head thrown back inky hair flows nearly to her waist, she stands still as a statue the only thing moving is white fog swirling up around perfect legs. Spotlights flash on either side, mirror images heads bowed, supplicants.
She moves down the steps, the drum beats faster. Her hips move flowing as if unhinged, fluid. All eyes follow her, silent and worshipful; this is the moment they have waited for. The mirror images move, lift their heads and join her in dance; their bodies move together, clothing drops. A veritable buffet a cornucopia of womanhood on display before a room of wolves and the room erupts in whistles and dollar bills.
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Very evocative. I like this one a lot!
Thank you, it was intended to paint a picture of duality
Still makes me smile π
Me as well.
Could use some of those dollar bills myself. Must read that again for instructions. LOL
Oh Ian, I am afraid you and I might not fit the playbill. I know I won’t be undressing in public anytime soon.
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Oh well, it was nice for me to live in la la land for a while. rotfl
Super hot, Valentine. I must live too sheltered a life as I expected the boys in blue at the mention of the lights. This whole piece is utterly f.l.u.i.d. You’ve sure captured the mood. I’m still swaying with her (even with MY knobby knees). This is awesome.
Oh good Tess, it was intended for us girls to love and sway to!
Yes ….. Somehow I picture a strip club early, so the end brought confirmation …. I finally got one right! π
Frank, is there something you are telling me here? Too many movies? The strip club is classic isn’t it?
Oh no …. just proud of himself for thinking the right thing at the beginning.
I didn’t know you usually got them wrong. You are such a good guesser otherwise.
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With this one, I was in the strip club very early. Just lucky.
Her hips move flowing as if unhinged, fluid. ***
YESssss, I see her. I am her!
Xxxx
See you soon, V.
Hopefully we are all her a little bit!
We all need a bit of her.
Fantastic flash. xxx
Meat on the menu, boys!
In case you are wondering – I committed a terrible sin – actually quoted someone else’s words – from the Lord of the Rings.
I suspected it came from somewhere, it seemed not in character with your finer sensibilities.
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She sounds absolutely sublime π
Wow you can certainly write these
FTP’s Val and with such style π
I love this one π
Have a wonderful Thursday my dear friend π
Andro xxxx
Thanks my friend. Buffet, not always food to be piled on a plate right.
No, but I like the idea of it π
Thank you for viewing my nutty
videos Val, actually I have just
added another one equally as
crackers but it’s all in good fun
and taste I think, well hopefully
it is anyway π lol
Have a lot of fun today my sweet friend π
Andro xxxx