Your name whispers across my dreams
Do you hear me across the distance
Are your dreams filled with me
As mine are with you
When I reach for you in the night
Do you feel my caress across your skin
From our final soft good-night
My eyes close and sleep overtakes me
I feel you wrap around me, pulling me in
My chest beats a tattoo, a rhythm of night
Sending primal messages, I chase eagerly
Through drenched sceneries we raised
With laughter and talk of other things
We build realms for us to explore
Shadows and silk trap me within reveries
Imagined by us for pleasure alone
I soar, unbound by any chain of propriety
Landing only when I hear your call to return
The weight of desire holds me to earth
Unremembered till you, unknown till now
Are you real, my heart tells me yes
Valentine, 13 September 2014
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So special! The line that really stood out for me was: “My chest beats a tattoo, a rhythm of night” — wow.
thank you Christy, I am always so glad when you read and comment. It means so much.
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Val I love your poetry.. Its powerful and sensual,.. Its good to escape within our emotions.. x Hope all is well with you xxx Catching up with you at last. 🙂
Aww, thank you Sue. When I am inspired I just write.
Wow! powerful, romantic and very steamy in that PG-13 way. Nicely done! My favorite line: “Landing only when I hear your call to return”
Try the rest of the Poetry section, some are not PG-13.
I am glad you enjoyed this one.
“Are you real, my heart tells me yes.” I sure hope so, Val. You deserve nothing but the best!
Thanks Monica.
“Are you real, my heart tells me yes.” That’s a profound thought. It deals with our discovery about people in general. Only after knowing them thoroughly can we really feel comfortable with them or reject them as friends or lovers.
Yes, you found the real question in the entire dreamscape Ian.
Are you real, my heart tells me yes**
beautiful xx
Thank you my friend.
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Lovely imagery in that verse, Val.
Thank you, sometimes seeing is believing. That at least is what I am going with.
Tenderly urgent. Well-captured. xxx
Yes, urgent might be the right word. Maybe I will use that as the next prompt.
I LOVE THAT LAUGHING PIC.
Caps lock absolutely required for emphasis.
Thank you, there is a story. I think you would love it also. Someday, I will tell it in total right here on these pages.
Soft. Rhythmic. The words are caresses. ❤
Thank you Tess, this was softer
Nice! I enjoyed your writing.
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Thank you Elan, I am always so happy when others enjoy what I do.
You’re welcome.
This was fantastic, thanks for sharing!
Thank you, I am pleased when others enjoy.
“Shadows and silk trap me within reveries”—Lovely.
Thanks Carrie. I find I need to step away
I so love that picture of you!! hugs … 🙂
Me too. There is a story behind it which makes me love it more.
So I gather …. I think you were saying a name?
Indeed, that was all it took. 😉
I remember!! LOL .. ❤