Fingertips press gently against
Kiss swollen lips
My hand follows the trail
Where you touched
You left reminders on curves
Of your desire
The daylight shines through
Bidding an end
While you pull me back
Demanding anew
Valentine, 20-September-2014
As I’ve said before, you have a knack for this.
Thank you Frank. I think maybe I am finding my voice
I think what makes this spectacular is that the reader gets into it and it’s over, not abrupt, but a tease, an emotion that lingers. ❤ 🙂
I wanted it to be that way, just that morning sunlight. I am glad you felt it. ❤
~(*_~)~~ ❤
I love when I g.e.t. it. Poetry is not me.
Wow, Val, you have a way of writing the most passionate, lusty poems. My heart is palpitating just reading it. Nice.
Thanks Monica. I am having fun with this new side of my blog. The exploration of new expressions. It is nice to step out of ourselves sometimes.
I enjoy these Fifty Shade of Val poems. Very sensual.
Gad, I hope I do a bit better than 50 Shades! 😉
I am glad you enjoy them. I am enjoying the writing of them. Well actually maybe better put I am enjoying the putting them out in the world
That is the beauty of life and new experiences, especially the most sensual of them; they inspire hope that indeed, we can very well be made anew.
It is, that feeling we might not be quite as broken or if we were we might just be fine and morning is for remaking.
beautifully said. Yes.
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Thank you Honey
Such sensual poetry Valentine, Beautiful .. !
Thank you Andy. It is such a pleasure to see you back.
Hope i can be back more often 🙂
Your passion shines brightly, Val, in absolutely superb poetry. This former catholic-school girl tries not to peek, but, alas, I often do and blush as expected.
I try Sue, to keep it somewhere between PG 13 and R 17, let the imagination wander a little bit.
But well, my poetry wanders where my heart desires. I think this is the thing with poetry. Dared to finally put myself out there and look where it led. Thank you for reading.
Your passion shines through in ALL your writing, Val–whether poetry, flash fiction, or current news and politics. It is all you, 100%. You go, girl ! 🙂
Anew Day anew Dawn.. and anew lover.. 🙂 loved your poem Val… xxx
Thank you Sue. It is something to consider isn’t it? Simply Anew.
🙂 xxx It is……. xxx