Awakened

Adult Warning – Over 18


 

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Awakened, muscles tight and skin glistening from a dream

Your face eludes me

The lingering touch of your fingers though is not unfamiliar,

My skin remembers the touch of you

I feel the tips of your fingers tracing the underside of my breast,

Β Your thumb across the tip of my nipple just the way I like it, how do you know

Your lips, soft on the spot where my shoulder and neck meet,

Your teeth bite just hard enough, drawing out first a sigh then a soft moan

I still feel you settling over me, while your hand traces the line of my waist,

With your other hand, you hold my hands above my head keeping me still

Finally, you kiss me forever you kiss me and the world spins away,

My hips unhinge and rise to meet you with that forever kiss and I am undone

Awakened, your face eludes me

Your touch though, when finally we meet I will remember

Valentine 24-April-2014

Comments

  1. You were right, I totally enjoyed this one as well. I can see it all. Clearly. And clearly we have the same dreams. πŸ˜‰ These for me are more often what I like to call “waking dreams” than actual dreams — which is why it’s possible to write them down and finesse the words so that people can feel the caresses as they read. I have to admit though, that all the people calling your musings erotica are kind of making me chuckle. I mean, I suppose that’s what it is but for me it really is just a manifestation of the thoughts that pop into my head when my muse smiles. I would never think to call my stuff erotica but I guess if it needed a designation that’s probably what it would be.

  2. Another tastefully done piece Val.. Its not often we can get awakened.. And some will eternally sleep in their narrow beds.. πŸ™‚ … Love and Light dear Val… handled well… πŸ™‚

  3. Your poetry takes me to a place of romance. Keep up with poetry land, dear Val!

    • This will likely be a once a week thing Christy. Some will come from journals, others are inspired by the now, the here and the wishful dreaming.

  4. This post stands alone but was written directly for Good Food Everyday who clearly believed it important to have her say. I allowed it, as I have in the past. I don’t censor, though she will be blocked in the future. I kept this post separate in an attempt to disengage from her as she clearly wanted the last word, I allowed this as well. To all my long time readers, if you come here, sorry for her vitriol, obviously she is disturbed.

    This is your last post. I have thus far allowed you to insult me and insult my writing. You have also, made assumptions, you know nothing about me, you know nothing about any of the people communicating with me or the long standing relationships we might have. You have been judgmental about both me and them. Suggest you remove the plank from your eye.

    You are correct, I liked one of your recipes. I will not make the mistake of giving you credit for your effort again. Now as I requested before, stop. Pay attention to what it says above the box, “Try Civility”. Something you have failed at abysmally thus far.

  5. What sort of filth is this ?

    • Note the warning? It is there for a reason, so as not to offend those who do not enjoy erotica / adult writing. It is one of the types of writing populating my blog. Not the only type but one of the types. I am sorry you find it offensive.

      • I find you very offensive flirting with men in public. Are you so desperate to write that. Anyone can. , at least i do not have to stopp so low becuase i am not fat and ugly !

      • I find you offensive totally. You are chasing other womens husbands and partners. Go find your own and keep your filth to yourself !

        • Are you done? In fact this isn’t the case. I have given you a say. Thank you for sharing your opinion.

          • It is the case because inhave seen it with my own eyes and read your messages to your bloggers. The on,y reason i clicked in is that you came on my blog, keep your hands off men that dont belong to you and posting suggestive photos of yourself. It is undignified and you should know better at your age. I am sorry i am nkrmally a calm person bit despise what i have seen. We all have hard lifes and go through hard times but you are ruining other people s lives with your behavior !

          • I apologise but you offended me in the same way i found you offensive. my apologies

  6. Very nicely done. You should write more!

  7. This gave me shivers. Oh my!

  8. Wow Val, nicely done! πŸ™‚

  9. ***My skin remembers the touch of you***

    I understand.

    I Loooooooooooove.

    xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

  10. Beautiful.

  11. Ooh, look at ya! I see some erotica in your future. Y’all hold on to your britches!

  12. I’m behind on my blog reading, but glad I didn’t miss this one! Nice eroticism, Val!

  13. Wow! Well done, dear Val! Glad to learn from the comments that you plan to do more of this!

    Hugs from Ecuador,
    Kathy

    • Mostly Kathy it is a plan to transcribe from my journals. A decision to take what it is already handwritten and decide which / what part of me I am willing to show. These are very personal. Not that I haven’t already show very personal parts, but these seem somehow more personal.

  14. I guess my suggestion you say to hell with marriage and just find yourself a young military guy is coming true, huh? πŸ˜‰

  15. Getting R rated over here and whatnot. Well, alrighty then.

  16. Yes. Yes. Yes. YES! YES! YES!!! OH GOD, YES!!

    Sorry…got a little carried away there…

  17. Does a cold shower come with this post? πŸ˜‰

  18. I like this one a lot Val, and your description
    could almost be… Well I too know what delights
    the senses, and what a dream you expressed,
    it needs tweaking to really enhance the power
    of passion and the wanting, but wow you have
    certainly delivered with this erotica my sweet
    and dear friend.

    I think your dreams have that awesomeness of
    desire, the wickedness of the moment and a deliciously
    engaging sweetness that fulfils the excitement within the
    dream, or a reality, the thirst of loving that needs to be
    quenched morning, noon and night.

    Well I only said…

    Lovely writing Val, you need
    to add more of these delights πŸ™‚

    Andro xxxx

    • I will add more from my handwritten journal, it was difficult to finally get the courage to add the first one. These, well these have always been my private musings. I am going to start archiving some previous posts, I decided to add poetry to the mix and thought why not, I will start with my most recent journal.

      Thank you for your encouragement. πŸ™‚

      • I just know that I am going to enjoy your awesomeness my dear friend, and I am
        certain that others will too πŸ™‚

        I didn’t know you wrote such wicked pieces
        but I think it’s a great idea to add them πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

        Have a lovely rest of
        day and a sweet evening πŸ˜‰

        Andro xxxx

  19. OK … now I’m horny. (I couldn’t resist). You have a knack for poetry … well done!

  20. Jueseppi B. says:

    Reblogged this on The ObamaCratβ„’.

  21. This is well written – and so very tasteful too.

  22. A very tender moment in time there.

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