Adult Warning – Over 18
Awakened, muscles tight and skin glistening from a dream
Your face eludes me
The lingering touch of your fingers though is not unfamiliar,
My skin remembers the touch of you
I feel the tips of your fingers tracing the underside of my breast,
Your thumb across the tip of my nipple just the way I like it, how do you know
Your lips, soft on the spot where my shoulder and neck meet,
Your teeth bite just hard enough, drawing out first a sigh then a soft moan
I still feel you settling over me, while your hand traces the line of my waist,
With your other hand, you hold my hands above my head keeping me still
Finally, you kiss me forever you kiss me and the world spins away,
My hips unhinge and rise to meet you with that forever kiss and I am undone
Awakened, your face eludes me
Your touch though, when finally we meet I will remember
Valentine 24-April-2014
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You were right, I totally enjoyed this one as well. I can see it all. Clearly. And clearly we have the same dreams. 😉 These for me are more often what I like to call “waking dreams” than actual dreams — which is why it’s possible to write them down and finesse the words so that people can feel the caresses as they read. I have to admit though, that all the people calling your musings erotica are kind of making me chuckle. I mean, I suppose that’s what it is but for me it really is just a manifestation of the thoughts that pop into my head when my muse smiles. I would never think to call my stuff erotica but I guess if it needed a designation that’s probably what it would be.
Oh it fits the designation. Nothing else to call it.
I am so glad you are enjoying these.
Another tastefully done piece Val.. Its not often we can get awakened.. And some will eternally sleep in their narrow beds.. 🙂 … Love and Light dear Val… handled well… 🙂
I am seeing as I pull these out and as I write new ones, a new part of me coming forth. It strangely frees me Sue.
And so it should… Why is it that we woman have been held captive ashamed of our own bodies for so long.. This is the Awakened age of the Feminine! 🙂
Your poetry takes me to a place of romance. Keep up with poetry land, dear Val!
This will likely be a once a week thing Christy. Some will come from journals, others are inspired by the now, the here and the wishful dreaming.
This post stands alone but was written directly for Good Food Everyday who clearly believed it important to have her say. I allowed it, as I have in the past. I don’t censor, though she will be blocked in the future. I kept this post separate in an attempt to disengage from her as she clearly wanted the last word, I allowed this as well. To all my long time readers, if you come here, sorry for her vitriol, obviously she is disturbed.
This is your last post. I have thus far allowed you to insult me and insult my writing. You have also, made assumptions, you know nothing about me, you know nothing about any of the people communicating with me or the long standing relationships we might have. You have been judgmental about both me and them. Suggest you remove the plank from your eye.
You are correct, I liked one of your recipes. I will not make the mistake of giving you credit for your effort again. Now as I requested before, stop. Pay attention to what it says above the box, “Try Civility”. Something you have failed at abysmally thus far.
What sort of filth is this ?
Note the warning? It is there for a reason, so as not to offend those who do not enjoy erotica / adult writing. It is one of the types of writing populating my blog. Not the only type but one of the types. I am sorry you find it offensive.
I find you very offensive flirting with men in public. Are you so desperate to write that. Anyone can. , at least i do not have to stopp so low becuase i am not fat and ugly !
I find you offensive totally. You are chasing other womens husbands and partners. Go find your own and keep your filth to yourself !
Are you done? In fact this isn’t the case. I have given you a say. Thank you for sharing your opinion.
It is the case because inhave seen it with my own eyes and read your messages to your bloggers. The on,y reason i clicked in is that you came on my blog, keep your hands off men that dont belong to you and posting suggestive photos of yourself. It is undignified and you should know better at your age. I am sorry i am nkrmally a calm person bit despise what i have seen. We all have hard lifes and go through hard times but you are ruining other people s lives with your behavior !
I apologise but you offended me in the same way i found you offensive. my apologies
Very nicely done. You should write more!
Some I will just pull from old journals John, others I will write new. I think though just one a week. thank you
This gave me shivers. Oh my!
I hope good shivers. 😉
*nods*
Wow Val, nicely done! 🙂
Thank you, I do appreciate the feedback sine I was reluctant to share these.
***My skin remembers the touch of you***
I understand.
I Loooooooooooove.
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Thank you, I am glad.
Beautiful.
Thank you
Ooh, look at ya! I see some erotica in your future. Y’all hold on to your britches!
Perhaps, I am thinking this will be a regular feature. I am inspired.
I’m behind on my blog reading, but glad I didn’t miss this one! Nice eroticism, Val!
Thank you. I have been hiding these, maybe for too long. Time to come out from under my covers.
Good idea.
Wow! Well done, dear Val! Glad to learn from the comments that you plan to do more of this!
Hugs from Ecuador,
Kathy
Mostly Kathy it is a plan to transcribe from my journals. A decision to take what it is already handwritten and decide which / what part of me I am willing to show. These are very personal. Not that I haven’t already show very personal parts, but these seem somehow more personal.
I guess my suggestion you say to hell with marriage and just find yourself a young military guy is coming true, huh? 😉
Nah, these are handwritten in a journal. Thought, what the hell why not share another side of me. Shocking?
Getting R rated over here and whatnot. Well, alrighty then.
Have an entire journal of things like this, decided to add one a week. Maybe more we will see. It was a risk I decided to take.
Yes. Yes. Yes. YES! YES! YES!!! OH GOD, YES!!
Sorry…got a little carried away there…
That is alright, it is intended to invoke a response.
Does a cold shower come with this post? 😉
Is your water running?
Thought I would begin to show another side of me. It did come with a warning. 😉
“It did come with a warning.”—All the more reason to read. 😉
I like this one a lot Val, and your description
could almost be… Well I too know what delights
the senses, and what a dream you expressed,
it needs tweaking to really enhance the power
of passion and the wanting, but wow you have
certainly delivered with this erotica my sweet
and dear friend.
I think your dreams have that awesomeness of
desire, the wickedness of the moment and a deliciously
engaging sweetness that fulfils the excitement within the
dream, or a reality, the thirst of loving that needs to be
quenched morning, noon and night.
Well I only said…
Lovely writing Val, you need
to add more of these delights 🙂
Andro xxxx
I will add more from my handwritten journal, it was difficult to finally get the courage to add the first one. These, well these have always been my private musings. I am going to start archiving some previous posts, I decided to add poetry to the mix and thought why not, I will start with my most recent journal.
Thank you for your encouragement. 🙂
I just know that I am going to enjoy your awesomeness my dear friend, and I am
certain that others will too 🙂
I didn’t know you wrote such wicked pieces
but I think it’s a great idea to add them 🙂 🙂
Have a lovely rest of
day and a sweet evening 😉
Andro xxxx
OK … now I’m horny. (I couldn’t resist). You have a knack for poetry … well done!
Okay, so grab your wife and enjoy.
I have a journal I hand write them in, till now I haven’t shared them. With some prodding I have decided to do so. Especially since soon I will be taking some past posts down.
Can’t be done … already gone for the day. Adding poetry shows another side of you., so consider it in the mix.
I am multi dimensional, should I consider medication?
No meds needed … but maybe additional wine.
🙂
Reblogged this on The ObamaCrat™.
I blush at your reblogging of this one.
This is well written – and so very tasteful too.
Thank you. I decided with some prodding to finally take the poetry I write by hand and start adding it.
A very tender moment in time there.
Just a dream I think