Warning – Adult Over 18
Whispers across my soul, you said you wanted to see me naked
You asked me, how it feels to be this open
I couldn’t answer, my voice caught by breathlessness
My lips swollen, bee stung and bitten
Silk rubs against my eyes, my wrists; naked I am exposed to you
I feel the warmth of your gaze as it travels the length of me
Naked, you wanted me exposed; open to each intimate touch
Unable to shrink away you hold me still, tracing my ribs
Up my thigh across my hip, flattening your palm against my stomach
Be still; stop moving you tell me as instinctively I try to twist away
You ask again, how it feels to be this open
I have no answer but the soft moan that escapes as you touch the most sensitive parts of me
Your breath heats my skin as your hand smooth’s up my inner thigh
I fall apart naked from the inside out, exposed to you
Without secrets, one final touch I shatter into thousands of pieces spinning wildly
Be still you say as your fingers spread across my most secret spaces
Silken cords loosen, my hands fall free and I reach for you first
Be still you say, don’t you want to see as you remove the silk from my eyes
You ask again, how it feels to be this open
I can only reach for you, to show you what you have shown me
Valentine, 29-March-2014
QBG_Tilted Tiara 
Val this was very sensuous.. Phew.. I think I need a glass of water to cool down LOL.. or something!.. 🙂 Did you know its now the age when the feminine is coming into her own.. So many are now daring to publish their thoughts… This was an excellent opener Val… 🙂
Thank you Sue. So many of these are in my private journals. Still others are being written now. I am picking and choosing which to publish, for now one a week. It is somehow freeing to let this next piece of me out.
I look forward to reading….. 🙂
Wow. Beautiful, Val. Simply beautiful.
Thank you Monica. These are hard to put out there, they feel more revealing. I am glad most people have a very positive reaction to them.
Another delicious glimpse into your world of erotica
and what a pleasurable read, I hope you will be showing
us a lot more of these scripts my dear friend 🙂
Wow wicked or what? 😉
Have a lovely weekend and
be good, though judging from
these two gems that might be
more difficult than imagined 😉
Andro xxxx
Thanks Andro, I am glad you enjoyed. 😉
I am enjoying everything that
you add, as always my sweet
friend 🙂
Have a nice day today my dear 🙂
Andro xxxx
Have you been reading my thoughts, Val? This is one that I would read aloud. To myself. I get it. I feel it. I love it.
I am so glad. Read Awaken, I think you will get that one also.
Ironic how a silk blindfold actually makes this person feel more open. I love the imagery. This is very exotic and sensual.
Very eRotic, you might even say. (I think I was a little bit flustered there).
🙂
Thank you, this is a new one versus from the journals. I think sometimes loss of some of our senses creates the need for greater trust.
The adjectives in the previous comments are spot on … vulnerable, yet forthright … Sensual, yet tepid …. Subtle, yet deep …. and hopefully helpful in your journey forward.
Some of these Frank, have been in a journal for a very long time. Others are being written now. I am not going to reveal which are which, I simply decided I would begin adding them to the mix.
Open? I wonder if human beings can be completely open with each other even under such pleasurable circumstances? There is always a little bit of us we keep to ourselves isn’t there?
I think, maybe if there is a degree of privacy (blindfold) we might allow more vulnerability. If we trust enough to be bound, more vulnerability. That is the ‘open’.
It is always an issue of trust, isn’t it Ian.
This is outstanding. Sensual and so very good. 😉
You’ve got a real knack for sensual poetry Val! 🙂
Thank you Izaak. It is all in my head
Open indeed yet subtle enough and very sensual ..love this Val thank you for sharing. 🙂
It is important, I think. These pieces that fall out, now they come from my journals to these pages. Now the other parts of me fall free.
It is liberating and healing.. You know when I was reading it the meme you shared on FB came to mind – the one about remembering you were wild..I can see it in my head but not quote it – do you know the one I am talking about? It just popped in my head about halfway through..
I know exactly the one
😉
Yep that’s what I thought of and I love the way you are going 🙂
Reblogged this on The ObamaCrat™.
As I am always am, gratitude is my best expression.
😉 😎
I will assume you liked this. As always, thank you for the reblog I am touched and as I am always am, grateful.
Oooh. Nice
Thank you. I try to change it up now and then.
This is so very sensual, Val – my, such a tasteful piece. To be open and vulnerable – takes immense trust.
Peace and blessings,
Eric
Journals that have remained private for a very long time are hard to open up. Time to open the last private space Eric, new freedom I think.
Thank you, you commenting in a positive light means a great deal to me.
Val